hoe vertaal je de onderstaande zin in het engels?

Adele first performed on a school concert. She sang Rise which was originally perfomed by Gabrielle.

Adele’s first performance was during a schoolconcert. She sang the song Rise by Gabrielle

During Adele’s first appearance at a school concert, she sung the song Rise composed by/known from Gabrielle.

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she sung moet natuurlijk she sang zijn. Slip of the finger…